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| author | Steve Klabnik <steve@steveklabnik.com> | 2016-04-28 09:51:44 -0400 |
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| committer | Steve Klabnik <steve@steveklabnik.com> | 2016-04-28 09:51:44 -0400 |
| commit | 32db236342433127edf72cff64c7d858d7b8ee22 (patch) | |
| tree | 48ac61a9e7465679102cf87e515078487461a012 | |
| parent | 385a54f4d49947faf0aa8e4fe2114761a45d0768 (diff) | |
| parent | f7ec6873ccfbf7dcdbd1908c0857c866b3e7087a (diff) | |
| download | rust-32db236342433127edf72cff64c7d858d7b8ee22.tar.gz rust-32db236342433127edf72cff64c7d858d7b8ee22.zip | |
Rollup merge of #33095 - xogeny:xogeny-patch-1, r=steveklabnik
Tweaks to sections related to Ownership
Reading through these sections, I thought the intro text could be improved slightly. So
here is a PR that addresses what was bugging me about it. :-)
Main issue was the wording of the opening sentence ("guide" is not clearly defined and the
wording was a bit too terse in my opinion). I also took issue with the term "one of the most
unique". Uniqueness is a `bool`, not an `f64`. :-)
r? @steveklabnik
| -rw-r--r-- | src/doc/book/lifetimes.md | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | src/doc/book/ownership.md | 4 | ||||
| -rw-r--r-- | src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md | 4 |
3 files changed, 6 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md b/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md index 695b1614fb7..cb075731898 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md +++ b/src/doc/book/lifetimes.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % Lifetimes -This guide is three of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the last of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: diff --git a/src/doc/book/ownership.md b/src/doc/book/ownership.md index 988103a1180..e2e0403b738 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/ownership.md +++ b/src/doc/book/ownership.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % Ownership -This guide is one of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the first of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: diff --git a/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md b/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md index 67a8a82f2a3..a28f450c942 100644 --- a/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md +++ b/src/doc/book/references-and-borrowing.md @@ -1,7 +1,7 @@ % References and Borrowing -This guide is two of three presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of -Rust’s most unique and compelling features, with which Rust developers should +This is the second of three sections presenting Rust’s ownership system. This is one of +Rust’s most distinct and compelling features, with which Rust developers should become quite acquainted. Ownership is how Rust achieves its largest goal, memory safety. There are a few distinct concepts, each with its own chapter: |
